I liked the original better.
Since you really just played the same thing higher and lower that didn't tkae too much originality. T'was more diverse though. Became less clear with that background noise...actually that was sorta annoying to me, but some people might like it. Again, didn't seem to take that much effort...could be wrong.
Nope man, this "remix" sucks lol if it can even be called one. thanks for reviewing anyway man ^^
Sounds like first song ever.
Ya, you know...it has that... that "i'm new" feeling to it. It's sorta lacking in melody, well not lacking but you seem to be just putting in randomn notes. Drums are hot though. Melody made my ears bleed, drums made me dance. And though this is ur first, and I know for a fact you have now made many better, I'm still going to give advice. The beggining few notes weren't bad, if you can't come up with alot of good melody, just repeat a small very very good melody and people won't say "boo, you can't think of nothing better", they'll say, "Yay, an encore!" Then right before the repeat happens so much that it starts to get boring, add a little variation. Now you got their attention again, then, change directions on em. Boom! A completely different melody, and they didn't see it coming, they're going "Wooooah!" It's like a roller coaster ride, now ya have to make the newer melody better than the first, that's the hard part. Them drums, keep em steady, they can even doo the same thing and repeat the whole time or add variation, the drums only need to make em dance if the melody is taking them on a ride. Then ya take em back home with the melody u started off with. You know about tonic? That's usually the note u start on and the one you end on, like a loop, or a roller coaster ride, it ends where it begins...but not always ;)
This song sucks a lot more after u point all that stuff out lol, very very good advice though man, this was my first EVER song i made, i didnt know half of what i was doing though man :-\
Another good one.
All your stuff seem to make really good video game music. Prolly cuz it's trance feeling...or is it techno...I realy can't tell the difference all too well.
I think my buddy might like this, cuz it sounds like something he'd dance to on DDR. I'm-a try to get him on this site.
Thanks man ^^ glad u liked it, and im happy about all the reviews too! i dunno about the whole video game thing though, i never really tried to make a video game song so... yea ^^
Thanks for your review!
-Alyk
Well...
All these reviews before me have one thing in common. They sorta have nothing to do with the music. Ok, it's a collab, and it's niether of your styles, but that's ok, it looks like it's a completely orinal style when you put too artists together. Honestly, I would be glad if I could mash my work with someone else. Since it's like nothing you guys have alone, it's original, and since it's not just one person's but more than one, it is diverse.
It's video game theme like, and it is also techno, so it got a heavy step. This would be good in a video game, seriously.
Thanks for the review OCON.
well..... not necessarily a collab man, i only worked on it for like 30 mins and just started something really quick for one of my friends, then my friend gave it to Darth_Synth, i honestly like his music, hes a very talented artist, so disrespect is not what i was going for at all. yea man, no problem with the review man! take care man!
-Alyk
That's what's hot.
I love a song that makes me wanna dance.
*Break Dances on the floor*
Ok, I'm done. Yes it is catchy, and sweet.
Oo..creepy 0.o
This stuff scared the mess outa me!!!!!
lol, yea man, this one was my first collab, and it was very tripped out i thought.
It's getting there.
Ok, I see where you're going, and you actually explained to me earlier that you didn't like it. I was going to help you with it but I couldn't connect to ya. I wasn't quite sure where beat 1 was. Like, it was kinda hard for me to find the rhythm. The instrument choice was good though. It doesn't need more, but for a higher Diversity rating, I would use more instruments or more variations. Originality, gave it a 4 cuz it sounded like somethin' I heard before. The name escapes me though. I think you sorta gave up on this song because you hated it and it was already done. Well, I hope I can help you out on your next song, because it IS geting there. It just needs that one thing, like I told you before. Somebody else could probably tell you, but I can't really put my finger on it right now.
It's nice to review, even if you don't like the song, you can help someone out. That way, you can expect more and better music from that person.
That's What's Hot
It needs words man. Do you mind if I get a couple of friends to rap to this and put it on Newgrounds? I would credit you, or I could just send it back to you with words and u can post it on ur page. My brother in the other room heard it and told me to save this.
Email me <Rythiman@hotmail.com> with ur answer man.
This is raw.
Oh, and incase you think I might steal it and don't want to give me permission, let me add one thing (incase your doubtful). If I wanted to steal it....I wouldn't ask for your permission.
Please, I always wanted to Collab, and this is hot.
(And I wouldn't have clicked on this if you hadn't convinced me to listen to another with ur "Below the Surface".)
That's more like it.
That's great, you're trying new stuff. Don't maybe you could combine themw ith ur old ideas and make something great. But sometimes things clash so you gotta recognize when that's going to happen.
It's still lacking in one thing, can't put my finger on it. But this is real music.
Ya need you're own style. Something that makes it a PARANOiA special. Something so that when people try to emulate it, it's not as good as the original.
This was going to be my last review, but you've interested me, I'm going to check out one more of your audio.
Again, there was a slight lack of effort
I don't know what to say, it's good but it seems to be missing one thing. Oh, and what's up with the explosion at the end? Lol, you were board so you made this cause you had nothing else to do I guess.
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my remix of my first song