Rythim-Man's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Guitar.]

This is good.

This is one of those things that if a flash artist used it right, it would be perfect. All I can say is, it gets boring without alittle bit of "flash" inbetween. But IN a flash, it makes no difference.

Btw, I love the articulation of the guitar.

Zi3ntar responds:

In a flash?
But nobody will do that. No one can see me. (?)
But i agree. This is a little boring when you hear that.
But i thin its nice at the same time.
*i guest*

[DZK - Beneath the pavement]

This was nice.

This is a rare thing, when you have hip-hop, with a nice voice that has extrodinairely clarity. Good original idea as well. I sort of don't believe you made this song, it is THAT good.

DZKilla responds:

I'm a bit confused...you think I stole it?

[Suicidal Habits]

Menu Music for sure.

This is good, is their a main theme for this? You know like a song that goes with it? That would be really cool! But It's nice, I see alot of effort in so little time.

[Play it Sexy]

Ok for a start.

Needs to be a bit clearer. But channeling is good, and it's a good beat.

[Wavelength pt.1]

What Can I Say. It's good

This is very good, but not quite enough to keep my attention. no wait...maybe I'm just sleepy.

[Do What You Gotta Do]

Same as before.

Channel it alittle better, I don't like to hear the voice coming only from the left. It's good idea ya just need to work ont he little stuff like clarity and such. Put more effort into the "music".

ScaredOfTrees responds:

Yeah...this is one I did few days ago...I understand how to channel it now.

Also any tips on how to improve clarity?

[Fixed mind (at home)]

Got annoying pretty quick.

Yea, nice, but not something I'd listen to alot. It's sorta hard on the ears, but even that can be used in a flash if the artist knows what he's doing. It could turn out great!

[My Arrival]

Ya, just work on it.

Good idea, just um, work on the channeling and "Rythim" alittle bit. I don't like fowl mouth music, but to be fair, this is an ok song.

[-MrMaestro- (ST) Journey]

This was great.

This does feel like a long march in the desert or something like that. It's royal too so it's probably a bunch of knights or noble men crossing the plains. I love how your songs can tell a story.

DavidOrr responds:

Awsome! Thanks for the review!

[-MrMaestro- Forsaken Skies]

Yes!!

Yes, I like this. It is like, really cool N' stuff. It would be perfect if you had held that last note just half a second longer!

DavidOrr responds:

Hmm, I'll consider that if I revise this with my new software. Thanks fro the review!